Dawn,
the coldest hour, Einar shivering under his shelter-tree, no insulation on his
body, bones turning to ice, damp leaves and needles with which he had attempted
to insulate himself hardly doing a thing anymore and he was all out of energy
to keep up the regimented movements that had got him through the night, dizzy
and nauseated as his body searched for any source of fuel within itself, and
found nothing. No good crouching there
any longer. Cramping up so badly that he
knew quick movement would soon prove impossible, if he didn’t do something to
reverse the situation.
Had
to get up, move a little, but in making the attempt he found his body
impossibly heavy, unresponsive, gravity, when he really pressed the matter,
rising up to slam him into the frozen soil beneath his shelter-tree. Shattered vision, dawn-dim world falling away
in shards before him, swimming, shimmering, making no sense, blackness, and
then the taste of blood between his teeth.
Couldn’t seem to immediately gather himself for further movement so he
lay there, waiting, dimly aware of the slow trickle of blood from some small
rock-scrape on the side of his face.
Strangely, the stuff seemed to be reviving him some, bringing him back
to something like full awareness, and that could only be good.
A
hint of a twisted smile, eyes closed against the strengthening light. Completely illogical, he knew, that he could
survive thus on his own substance, sustain himself, but it seemed to be helping
for the moment, the blood, and he stayed as he was, allowing it to trickle
freely into the corner of his mouth until, between the cold and his rather
advanced dehydration, it stopped of its own accord. Einar might have slept then, much to his own
detriment and dismay, had not the trend started by the action of gravity and
the taste of his own blood been furthered by a persistent rustle and crunch in
the vegetation slightly uphill of his position.
Suddenly
quite wide awake Einar kept still for only a fraction of a second before
rolling silently to his stomach and pushing himself to hands and knees,
stalking into the sparse brush along the rim and using it to his best advantage
as he sought to put some quick distance between himself and whoever might be
moving around up above. Not a small
creature, he was certain, no bird, rodent or even a small canine such as a fox
or coyote, and much as he might have wished to believe that his visitor could
be a deer, elk or even a mountain lion—would have been welcome, just then,
considering the alternative—he knew enough of the patterns and movements of
different creatures to be quite sure he was dealing with a being of the
two-legged variety. More than one of
them, in fact, for presently he picked up on a second set of movements some
five or six yards beyond the spot where the first had made itself audible. Moving very slowly they were, clearly
attempting stealth, and doing a decent job of it.
Making
his way into some heavier vegetation and pausing there, feeling a good deal
more well concealed, Einar considered his options. With only two intruders seemingly present, he
hesitated to attempt doing anything about them, lest the third—assuming these
were the same whose camp he had been observing the previous night—see him act
and either move in to surprise him, or leave the area with stories to tell, and
return with friends. He needed to
account for that third person, and in the meantime, had to find a way out of
the trap into which these intruders had boxed him, sheer cliffs on one side,
they holding the high ground on the other.
Only one direction of travel remained to him, seeing as the canyon rim
to the north was nearly devoid of vegetation, a limestone tundra wasteland
which offered him no concealment. His
opponents—for that was how he knew he must view them—would surely know this,
and might well have positioned that un accounted-for third man in the brush to
the south, to intercept his flight.
Knife in hand as he crept along, Einar was ready.
Nothing. A very strong feeling that he was being
watched, hair rising on the back of his neck, prickling, but no sound came from
the brush near him, no sudden movement or unannounced blow to the base of the
skull, so he kept moving, fighting down an urge to rise, run, make a break for
it, knowing that would be the end of everything. Slow movements, cautious, more than a minute
passing, at times, between painstaking steps, no rustle or crunch to give away
his incremental escape. Whether because
of his stealth or—though he would have entirely discounted the theory at the
time—no one was really listening, Einar succeeded in extricating himself from
the immediate area of his nighttime shelter, reaching at last a spot where the
evergreens grew taller, canyon rim decaying in places, sheer cliffs broken by
steep gullies that descended, precipitous but not entirely vertical, towards
the flatness of the canyon floor far below.
It was this floor towards which Einar made, knowing he would remain somewhat
trapped down between those walls, more thoroughly trapped, in some ways, than
he was up there on top, but seeing little alternative. His escape up on the surface seemed very
tenuous indeed, seeing as his opponents held the high ground and he had been
confined to the narrow strip of scraggly timber between the vast, open grass
and snow meadows of the mesa behind him, and the sheer dropoff of the limestone
cliffs.
Down
it was, then, Einar picking his way from rock to rock in the nearest gully, descent
not quite as slow as had been his movements up top, but tremendously cautious,
nonetheless. Little room in his mind as
he descended for thoughts other than those relevant to his immediate situation,
Einar did spend a bit of time attempting to puzzle through the circumstances
that had led him to this predicament, hoping thus to stumble upon some solution
which might see the day ending some other way for him than dead, captured or on
the run once more and closely pursued.
It was clear—unless his mind happened to be concocting an
extraordinarily detailed and convincing false scenario based on a few scraps of
available data, which he doubted—not only that he really had been spotted by
the man that past night who had stood beside the creek scanning the canyon rim
with binoculars, but that the man and at least one of his companions had spent
the night climbing up out of the canyon after him. The full meaning of this happening remained
hidden to him, but it definitely did not represent the typical behavior of a
group of causal hikers, hunters or fishermen enjoying a weekend in the
backcountry. He was being hunted. Had known it the night before, known on some
level that there was no other explanation for the long, lingering gaze of
Binocular Man, the moment when their eyes had seemed beyond doubt to meet. Though under other circumstances one might
easily have explained away such an occurrence, Einar had known. Had spent too many years both in the role of
hunter and hunted to mistake what had happened for anything less sinister. And had failed to act.
Well,
he was acting now, and with any luck—ha!
Luck has absolutely nothing to do with it—he would live not only to
remove himself from this situation, but would be able to return to Liz and
Will, as well, rather than striking out on his own and effectively abandoning
them in order to lead the threat in the opposite direction. Was looking good, he thought, when he found
himself after some time nearly two thirds of the way down to the canyon floor
without incident and without dislodging any rocks or making any but the most
insignificant of sounds in his travel.
Gully
curving some as it descended, Einar was before too much longer able to look
back up at the spot where he had spent the night, stopping in a cluster of
scraggly, crag-clinging limber pines to take a look. Nothing at first, save the bare limestone and
low-growing evergreen mat with which he had become so intimately acquainted in
the night, but he knew not to give up so easily, letting his eyes wander
slightly, vision go wide and stay that way, rim something of a blur. There!
Movement! He was sure of it, did
not immediately attempt to better focus his eyes, knowing from long experience
that this softer focus would allow him to more effectively pick up on slight
movements in the distance. Strategy
succeeded. There it was again, the
quick, stealthy movements of a human who did not want to be seen, and if he was
not mistaken it was coming from almost precisely the spot where he had passed
the night. Not good. Not good at all, for these people, whoever
they might be, would know by now that he had been there, that someone had, and
were perhaps even then beginning to work out his trail, come for him…
Not
good, but perhaps not as bad as it had initially sounded, either, for he had a
tremendous head start on the, was already quite well on his way to being in the
canyon, where he could make far better time than could they, as they worked
their careful way down the treacherous bowling alley of that loose, rocky
gully. By the time they reached the
canyon floor, he could be several miles away, up another gully and out of
there, watching them in their confusion and eventually returning, if all went
well, to Liz. Maybe even before another
night came around. That sounded
good. Very good. Now that he’d quite moving for a few minutes,
he was really freezing again, feeling the absence of food, of something warm to
drink… Looking good, all of it, until,
starting to move again, there came a sudden if rather subdued sound from
somewhere only feet from his position.
Thanks FOTH
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DeleteThank you Foth, the story as intriguing and tense as always.... and I did not need Cliff to come visit ...Lol. I always get booted when I try to comment, but Thank you very much for the updates !
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DeleteS...... talk about a cliffhanger! great story...just caught up on the first two. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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DeleteChris, in the future, if you are going to Cliff Hanger us .... Would you Please Provide Two Weeks Notice????
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Two whole weeks? :D
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