18 January, 2012

Comments from 17 January


Eric
said…
Glad to see that the Kilgore's have made a safe arrival. Perhaps Einar will take a load off for a day or two once he's convinced that invasions not imminent. At this point, Einar is so malnourished that he will have permanent deficiencies in his muscles and skeletal system. His body is robbing his bones of the things it needs to survive. With no change, I can't see how he can make it much longer.

Yes, Einar’s body is by this point seeking energy and vital minerals wherever those things can be found, and that does have consequences.

An interesting note, since you mentioned this--studies have shown that the bone marrow of individuals who have been subjected to prolonged starvation stores nearly twice the amount of fat as those who are eating normally. This extra fat is thought to provide the body a small reserve of available energy that it wouldn’t otherwise have, but at the same time reduces the bone-forming capacity of the marrow, and causes loss of bone mass.

Philip said…

philip here again!

Gee do we ~really~ understand HOW much writing Chris does for us?????

I downloaded to print (no other option in public library) Jan 1 to my last post: 37 pages @ font size 11, the smallest I can read easily. from then to today: 16.5 pages, Thank you my Brother in Christ, for your awesome efforts, this one misses the nightly read

Hello Philip! Good to hear from you again. Hate for you to have to print all of that out. If you can email me a physical address where you can receive mail, I’d be glad to print the story out and mail it to you once each week, if that would be helpful.

Sixfifty said…

Well, they survived the greeting! I'm starting to think that Einar has suffered irreversible brain damage from his self-inflicted starvation and malnutrition, He is routinely making choices that, if he were in his 'right mind', he would never make; decisions that are counter to survival. He is a consummate survivor with a head full of skills and knowledge but he is using none but the most primitive....and that is NOT a sign of a healthy mind. It is time for Einar to get some help (and accept it!). Of course it isn't MY story, is it?

He doesn’t really need help--he’s got everything he needs, right there. Just needs to decide to take advantage of it. But yes, I’m sure you’re right that his brain isn’t functioning at full capacity right now, and on the brief occasions when he realizes this, it greatly distresses him.

17 January, 2012

17 January 2012

Talk. Susan wanted time to talk, to try and reason with the fugitive, reassure him as to their motives and while the whole idea went against Bud’s better judgment--didn’t look to him as though Asmundson had much time, wind picking up, energy given him by the little tube of icing fading fast and another incident seeming all but inevitable; sometimes nothing less than swift and certain action is sufficient to do a job, and Bud never did see the sense in trying to reason with someone who’s not themselves reasonable--he decided to let her give it a try. For a few minutes, at least. She was brave, for sure. He had to give her that. Kept edging closer to Einar as she spoke, putting herself inside the safety zone he’d established for himself and thus all but forcing him to listen, heed her, and though Bud figured her method had at least a fair chance of succeeding, he kept wary eyes pinned to Asmundson’s face, watching for clues that the situation might be about to turn more dangerous, ready to take immediate action should he make a move.

Icing, Susan was saying, trying to convince him that the poison with which they’d somehow managed to knock him out was nothing more than cake icing, given him as an act of kindness to bring him out of what had been looking rather like the beginnings of a coma following his last unfortunate encounter with whatever force kept tossing him flat in the snow, stiffening limbs and scrambling his brain. Made some sense, when he thought about it, and though he had no memory of the latest incident he certainly did remember those of the previous day, and knew Susan might well be right about the direction he’d been headed when they’d given him…whatever it was they’d given him. Einar sniffed suspiciously at the residue in the little tube, yeah, sure, looks like what you say it is but I know you, Kilgore you clever old buzzard. Who knows what you may have put in this stuff before giving it to me. Could still be a trap. Whole thing could be a trap, especially now that you’re married and got something to lose. They may be blackmailing you. Threatening your bride, and what would you not do to protect her?

It was a riddle he could not solve, a matter of trust, and Einar couldn’t afford to trust. Which left him…a bit baffled, and very cold. Freezing. Hands not working right, rest of him soon to follow, and icing or not, he knew he must act pretty quickly if he was to avoid becoming incapacitated due to the forces of nature, alone. Knew he ought to be getting back into his parka, and if not that then at least the shirt; Liz, had she been there, would have seen to it that he did so quite promptly, rabbit stick enforcing her edicts if he was found to hesitate, but she wasn’t there, and somehow the idea remained stuck in his head that Kilgore must have used darts on him, must have tried, thick hide and fur layers of the parka stopping them before they could sink into his flesh and so of course he could not wear the parka just then, not before giving it a painstakingly thorough inspection, as the trapped darts might very well then be able to release into him their poison. Far better to remain a bit chilly--ha! Yeah, just a bit--than to risk such a thing, and very gingerly he rolled up the garment, wrapped it in his shirt for additional protection and tucked it beneath an arm, rising. Susan didn’t understand his apparent decision to remain exposed to the elements and would have liked to protest, try and convince him that he’d never make it if he allowed himself to freeze like that, but figured she’d better stop while she was ahead. Which she did seem to be, Einar appearing to have accepted, at least on the surface, her explanation about the icing, situation for the moment diffused somewhat and all of them ready to proceed.

Except for Einar, who was still having his doubts. The plane that morning had certainly taken its time surveying the area and disgorging its cargo, and while Einar had only seen the two sets of tracks in the basin, there seemed to him little guarantee that they were Bud and Susan’s, particularly with the gap that had taken place in his tracking as he’d traversed that icy little ledge below the dropoff. What if the pair had walked in, their presence masking that of the two men who had jumped from the plane and were waiting out there to follow them, seize him, take Liz and the baby…didn’t make a lot of sense and he knew it, but couldn’t quite seem to shake the idea or bar from his mind images of the cabin under attack, set afire, his little family trapped inside and then Muninn--the raven had been cautiously hanging back in the presence of the intruders, but was beginning to grow accustomed to them--swooped in and perched on his shoulder, talons digging into the skin until they brought blood. Einar, bowing slightly under the bird’s weight and brought rather forcefully back to the present by the hurt of that grip on his bony shoulder, took a sideways look at the bird, greeting him with a stiff grin. “What do you say, critter?” But the bird had no words for him, simply tilting his head and fixing Einar with the unfathomable liquid black of his eyes.

No help there; Einar was on his own. “I want to see your chute, Kilgore. Where’s your chute?” Some confirmation, at least, that the pair had jumped in, that the tracks had indeed been theirs.

Kilgore rose, muttering under his breath. “Packed it up and left it down in the basin. You can have it, but we’ll have to make another trip down there to retrieve it. Want me to take you right now?”

A trap, that, if he’d ever encountered one, and Einar had no intention of following the tracker down into the basin just then. Had no intention, actually, of leaving Liz alone a moment longer than he had to, and his mind was made up, launching the raven into the air and taking up his pack. “Another time. I’m headed for the cabin. You folks coming, or not?”

No choice, as Einar saw it. Had to take the couple with him back to the cabin--they already knew the way, location of the place no secret to them, and at least this way he could watch them, make sure they made no attempt to contact anyone. Which, he knew full well, they probably wouldn’t even have to do, if they had indeed been sent to bait and trap and finish him off. Their packs, clothes, boots, any and all of their possessions could be rigged with GPS transmitters to broadcast to their handlers exact latitude and longitude, but it didn’t make sense, really; if Kilgore had been compelled to work with the feds, deliver him for destruction, why risk putting boots on the ground, at all? He’d been to the cabin, could have simply given them coordinates, flown over and shown them the place, at most, and let them do the dirty work. Sounded a lot more feasible than jumping into the snowy basin with his new bride to do the job himself. The pair could probably be trusted. But he still insisted on walking them along ahead of him in the hopes of preventing any unwanted surprises, an arrangement which--despite a few misgivings on Bud’s part; scalp prickling at the thought of the danger that stalked heavily armed and arguably quite dangerous some ten yards behind them--they seemed quite willing to accept.

Only problem with the plan was that Einar, starting out, found himself so exhausted after the hike, the strenuous traverse of the dropoff and his longer than usual episode in the snow that he could not at times make it more than three or four steps without finding himself momentarily stuck in some sort of weird suspended animation, willing his legs to move but getting little response and it quickly became a problem, slowing his progress and making it all but impossible for him to keep up with Bud and Susan as they broke trail to the cabin. Susan tried to help, stopping several times to offer him food, water, a little pouch of energy gel from her pack--its composition somewhat similar to the icing that had so quickly revived him earlier--but each time Einar refused, simply shaking his head--couldn’t trust the stuff, no way--and declaring, “no, don’t need it, I’m fine…” To which Bud muttered under his breath and Susan just rolled her eyes, kept walking, hoping he might change his mind. Which, of course, he did not, but they finally made that quarter mile, anyway, approaching the cabin. Einar caught up to them at the edge of the timber just before the cliff that protected the back of the place and took the lead, wanting to be to be the first to get a look at the cabin, wanting to make sure things appeared alright. There it was, faintest hint of smoke curling lazily from the chimney and no strange tracks showing around the place, and Einar--though not tremendously pleased that Liz had gone ahead with a fire so soon after the appearance of the plane, no matter how carefully she was managing it to reduce the smoke--breathed a small sigh of relief.

“Let me go in first, tell her you’re here. You folks wait here with the bird.”

Einar crawled in, wave of warm air hitting him like a solid force as he pushed open the tunnel door, knife ready and every sense alert for trouble though he knew he’d have seen sign in the snow outside had anyone approached the cabin, tremendously relieved nonetheless to see Liz sitting there on the edge of the bed with little Will in her arms, looking entirely unharmed--looking great, actually, a bit of strain and worry showing in her face but otherwise she appeared very well rested, her color better than it had been that morning--and with a pot of stew going on the stove. She laid the baby gently in the bed at the sight of him, on her feet, arms around his neck in silent greeting.

“It was Kilgore,” he managed, breath nearly crushed out at the strength of Liz’s embrace and already beginning to shake in the warmth of the cabin. “And Susan. They’re out there.”

“What happened to you? Where are your clothes?”

He gave her a sheepish grin through chattering teeth, produced the parka and shirt from under his arm but stopped her when she tried to unroll it, meaning to get him all bundled up in a hurry. “No, don’t touch it. It’s…uh, I’ll tell you later. Just let it be for now.”

“Well then let me get you…wait, what did you say? Kilgore and Susan? Where?

“They’re right there out back. Told them to wait. You want them to come in?”

“Yes, I want them to come in! Right away! This means we don’t have to leave, then, because of the plane…”

“Not right now we don’t,” and he ducked back into the tunnel before Liz could make any more fuss over him--she’d been heading his way with the rabbitskin blanket--returning to Bud and Susan, who stood quietly conversing near the tunnel mouth.

“Come meet our son…”

Comments from 16 January

Nancy1340 said…
When is E going to start eating? You have him doing so in spurts and it's not working.
I think E. needs Dr. Phill to ask him "How's that workin' for you?" with all the times E's done the same thing over and over again.

The thing is, he'd probably say it's working pretty well for him, and is better than the alternative...

Colspt said…
Einar doesn't have an edge anymore. He used to know what was important to survive. How long can a body starve without suffering brain damage?

Einar doesn’t have brain damage--though deficiencies of certain minerals and general lack of fuel can temporarily interfere with brain function--but he certainly doesn’t like that Bud Kilgore seems to be able to come up there and get the best of him in his own territory. I guess he ought see that as a sign that something may need to change.


16 January, 2012

16 January 2012

Kilgore followed Einar behind the tree and stood watching him for a moment as he lay all stiff-limbed and staring in the snow, shaking his head and muttering something under his breath before finally becoming aggravated and bellowing his displeasure. “Asmundson, hey, whoa, what’re you doing here? Man, the things you’ll try to get out of talking with me, let me tell ya,” and he gave Einar a hard kick in the ribs--Einar, eyes wide open and starting, seemed to feel it but was unable to respond--was about to do it again but Susan grabbed his arm, stopped him.

“No! Don’t touch him. Please. He’s not doing that intentionally…”

“Oh no? Well then what’s he…wow, fella’s pretty bad off, isn’t he? What is it? Seizure of some kind? Don’t look like the ones I’ve seen, really. He’s not jerking around or anything.”

“I think that’s what it is, though. I’d like to help him, but don’t believe there’s really very much we can do until its over, and we’re just going to alarm him if we try to step in and do something right now, anyway. Let’s just stay back for a minute, and wait.”

Which they did, Einar’s limbs finally relaxing after a good minute and a half--far longer than his previous episodes, though he didn’t know it, didn’t know much of anything at the moment--but unlike on previous occasions he found himself slipping inexorably into something like sleep when it was over, attempted briefly to fight it but the thing was too strong, had him, rendering him quite thoroughly unconscious.

Bud stood watching in dismay, shaking his head. “Aw, man, I’m the one nearly got asphyxiated just a minute ago, how come he’s on the ground like this? Figure that blow to the head was a little too hard? Sure didn’t figure a critter like him to be so doggone fragile, or I might not have done it…”

“No, no you didn’t cause this…he just needs to eat, I think. Needs energy. He’s practically emaciated, starved, can’t have much of a reserve left and here he’s been out following us around all day in this cold--he’s probably just out of energy, low on sugar or something. Really, really low. We need to give him something sweet for energy, see if we can bring him out of this.”

“Now don’t you be getting too close to him! You saw what he almost did to me earlier, and that was with him presumably in his right mind. Whatever that is. Way too dangerous right now. Stay back.”

“We can’t just leave him lying there in the snow!”

“Sure we can. He’s tough. He’ll come out of it.”

“Maybe, but by that time he’ll probably be too hypothermic to do anything for himself, and that’s if he comes out of it. I’m not convinced that this is something he can come out of on his own.”

“Well then, let me do it. I’ll bring him out of it, alright.” With which Kilgore grabbed Einar’s spear and struck him a savage blow in the ribs with its butt end, Einar showing no response whatsoever.

“No! Don’t hurt him! I’m sure if he was able to be awake right now, he would be.”

“Then what you got in mind?”

“Like I said--some honey, sugar, something that’ll provide him with instant energy and hopefully allow his brain to wake back up. I’d give him a piece of hard candy or something, but he’d choke on it right now.”

“Oh, so like you’d do for a diabetic who’s got into trouble?”

“Exactly like that.”

“Well, I got this little tube of cake decorating icing in my medical kit that I carry for that purpose. Almost pure glucose syrup--with a few lovely artificial colorings added in, but he don’t look like he’s in any state to be objecting to that. You can just squeeze it into a person’s mouth, no danger of choking even if they aren’t entirely conscious.” He fished around in his pack, came up with the tube.

“Perfect! Let me…”

Kilgore snatched it back away from her. “No way! What if he comes right awake and grabs you? He could break your neck in half a second, and wouldn’t hesitate to do it, either. I got to be the one to do this.”

Keeping the spear ready in one hand as if dealing with a cage full of large, unruly half-wild animals that might at any time decide to rush him, Kilgore edged closer to Einar--yep, fella’s out like a light, nobody home but I can’t count on his staying that way--and squeezed nearly the entire contents of the little cake decorating tube into his mouth, which he’s pried open with a stick. No immediate response, Bud sitting on his heels and watching, taking an occasional tentative poke with the dull end of the spear in a rough attempt to gauge the fugitive’s level of conscious. Unchanged, it seemed, and when he saw that most of the icing had dribbled out of the side of Einar’s mouth he took the risk of approaching once more and carefully righting the unconscious man’s head before squeezing in the remainder of the tube. There. Better. Ought to be able to absorb a good bit of that, if nothing else.

This time the improvised medicine had its desired effect, Einar stirring after another minute, slowly waking and then--eyes wide and wild as he glanced around--scrambling rather clumsily to his feet, falling, rising again and putting some distance between himself and Kilgore, knife in hand when he saw that the tracker held his spear.

“Hi there, Asmundson. Kinda thought we’d lost you there for a minute.”

Einar was confused, head thick, foggy and throbbing terribly, leaving him a little scared, perhaps, last thing he remembered being the struggle with Kilgore and now here he was waking up flat on his back in the snow with some kind of…mysterious sticky green sweet-smelling substance oozing from his mouth and then he knew what had happened, what must have happened, tracker giving him a hard blow in the head and then drugging him with some sort of very powerful and quick-acting stuff, probably sticking him with a couple of darts for good measure, too, once he was out, and in a frenzy he took a few quick steps back into the timber, wary eyes on the two intruders as he tore off his parka, quickly searching himself for the telltale tufts of orange fuzz that would mark the tranquilizer darts, hoping desperately that he wasn’t too late to pull them out and save himself from total incapacitation. No orange, he didn’t see anything but knew it must be there, didn’t stop--soaked in sweat, heart pounding and fluttering, definitely something wrong with him--until he’d struggled out of vest and shirt and tossed his hat up into a tree while searching through his hair for the darts which he knew must be hiding there somewhere. Or maybe not. Seemed he wasn’t really feeling any weaker than he had been upon waking, a bit more steady on his feet, if anything, so perhaps the tracker had counted on the green stuff doing the entire job and he stuffed his mouth with snow, chewing, swishing, spitting in an attempt to remove any traces that might remain. Must have already swallowed a good bit of the stuff, the way he was feeling, but he was awake and felt as though he could remain so, and it would have to be enough. Now. Had to sort things out with Kilgore, somehow deal with him and get back to Liz, make sure no one had got to her in his absence.

The tracker was staring at him, Susan doing the same as the two of them conversed in hushed tones and then Susan took a step towards him, hands empty and slightly raised in a conciliatory gesture. Probably a trap, and Einar took another step back, warning her away with a shake of the knife. She was persistent, took another step.

“Einar, please listen to me. You were having some kind of seizure and then you passed out…we were just trying to help. We’re not here to do you any harm, either of us. Now will you please come sit down over here for a minute, have some food with us and get warm?”

He didn’t care at all for their kind of “help,” not one bit and he glanced around for his atlatl and darts, pack, wanting to secure them and give himself some longer-range weapons options, but Kilgore had taken everything, hung it in a tree where he couldn’t get at it. Figured. Angry and beginning to shake terribly as the bitter wind dried the sweat on his unprotected arms and torso Einar scrubbed at a bit of the strange, sticky green poison that remained hung up in his beard, tried to force his sluggish brain to tell him what he must do next. Act, act or he’d be lost, but short of ending the lives of the two individuals there before him--a questionable proposal, armed as he was with a knife and Kilgore with his spear and atlatl, and besides, Liz would be awfully mad at him when he told her what he’d had to do--the only reasonable course of action seemed to involve taking them back to the cabin with him where they could be properly questioned and debriefed, details pried out of them until they’d explained that low, circling plane and all the rest of it. Would have done the questioning right then and there except that he wanted so badly to be getting back to Liz and the baby, checking on them and making sure nothing had happened to them in his absence, and besides, they already knew the way to the cabin, would find their way soon enough if left to their own devices. Only one option, then. Too bad he didn’t have his weapons back so he could compel their compliance. Had better try and rectify the situation. Before he grew any colder and lost entirely the use of his hands.

Susan was watching him, sensed their danger and sat down right where she was. “Icing,” she casually remarked, “that’s just cake icing in your beard, and I’m sorry we had to give it to you without asking but you were completely out of it. Needed energy. We were just trying to help you wake up. Here, let me show you the tube.” Even with the tube in his hands--he’d jumped back at first as if she’d tossed a grenade, but picked it up, eventually, when it didn’t explode--Einar remained doubtful, confused, not remembering much about the past minutes and not at all trusting the pair’s intentions. Which was probably wise on his part, Bud seriously considering taking the drastic action of knocking Einar in the head and dragging him behind them to the cabin--he’d been describing it to Susan, suggesting they render him unconscious and tie him into one of their sleeping bags for the operation--probably would have done it, too, had Susan not been with him and thought to suggest otherwise, saving all of them a good deal of grief.

15 January, 2012

15 January 2012

Eight, then ten feet out on that ledge, and Einar was really struggling, clinging with all his might to his last set of handholds and suddenly finding himself unsure what to do next, not feeling like himself, all the usual confidence which normally saw him through such situations gone and the abyss tugging at him like he’d never in his life felt it do before, and for a moment he was sure he was going to fall, the certainty so powerful that he was nearly persuaded, in that brief moment, to let go, surrender himself to its inevitability. The feeling passed, Einar returning to himself again and continuing sure-footed, face twisted up in a weird, triumphant grin--beat you, ya buzzard; bet you thought you had me this time--as he picked his way across that ledge, but his hands were becoming a real problem, growing numb and wooden with the cold and refusing to work properly when he attempted to grasp roots, bits of brush, protrusions in the rock, and he paused, carefully jamming an entire hand into a wide crevice and making a fist to hold himself there--that, he could still do--pressing his free hand to the flesh of his stomach in an attempt to thaw it a bit and grinning again at the fierce burn and ache of returning circulation. Right. Good. That’s what I was looking for. He switched hands, then, a careful maneuver which left him for a moment unprotected, entirely vulnerable to a fall and the feeling of it seemed to give him new life, quicken his heart a bit and set him to grinning all over again, transfer complete, other hand warming, warm, ready to go…

Quietly and with a swiftness of which he would have doubted himself capable he completed the first half of that traverse, the going becoming a good bit more difficult after that simply due to the volume of ice which had cemented itself to the rock upon which he was attempting to find purchase, snow melting on the plateau above and dripping down, freezing, leaving everything terribly slick and uncertain and leaving him twice to rely on his the tenuous security of his handholds, feet going out from under him and slamming him into the wall as he scrambled and scrabbled for anything firm on which to place a foot. Found it, resting and exhausted for a moment before that grin returned, something telling him to be on his way, moving; to allow for any hesitation in that circumstance would, he knew good and well, be to set himself up for a rather swift and nasty end. Everything was icy, and worst of all, the ledge which had seen him safely along so far appeared to have disappeared, wall growing more sheer beneath his feet and he could only think--catching himself again, a mighty near thing--that he’d better be awfully thankful for the ice, for without it he would surely be knocking loose rocks and sending them crashing to the pile below, loudly advertising his position to the enemy. Once more, inching his way across the icy steepness, his hands were beginning to grow numb, but this time there was nothing he could do about it, no chance for even the slightest respite, for his legs were beginning to shake with the strain, threatening to give out; just had to pray his hands would continue working, and go on.

Made it. Almost. There was the timber, so dark and welcoming and…not vertical, its safety only feet away from the spot where he clung spider-like and trembling to an icy little protrusion in the rock, fingernails doing far more than their fair share of the work and feet flat against the steep ice, braced on nothing, body held in place only by the counter-pressure of his gripping hands and leaning body. Mighty tenuous. Not gonna last much longer like this, and then he was moving, launching himself nearly sideways off of the cliff with arms outflung and hands grasping, eyes locked on a little fir which clung spindly and twisted to the last little bit of nearly level ground before the world dropped away in the tangle of icy cliffs he’d just traversed, reaching it, wrapping desperate and half frozen fingers around its little trunk and hanging on as his body slammed into the rock face and then--he didn’t have the strength, wondered later how he’d ever managed that last feat-- hauling himself inch by inch up beside that tree until both feet were on the solid if steep ground of the timbered slope, scrambling, putting some distance between himself and the treacherous, yawning maw of that edge before finally he collapsed in the snow, body wedged securely behind the comforting solidness of a good sized spruce.

Get up. Got to see where they are, make sure they’re not onto you yet and then go do your thing, but his muscles refused to respond as he lay there exhausted, strength all spent, trembling uncontrollably after the strain and effort of the traverse, and he jammed wooden hands beneath his arms in search of some warmth, lay there for a few seconds trying to slow his breathing and listen before trying again to force himself upright and this time, he made it. Freezing. He hadn’t felt the cold in the least as he worked his way across that icy cliff face--aside from the progressing numbness in his fingers--but now that his focus had eased a bit it hit him full force, stiffening limbs, further interfering with his coordination and giving him a real struggle when he attempted to retrieve atlatl and darts from his pack and make himself ready to go on the hunt once more. No sign of the invading pair when he crept forward and peered down at the open area just behind the overlook and the cliff face he’d just traversed, no tracks out there in the open but of course there would not be tracks, they’d know better than to leave tracks where none needed be left, but the unmarred sweep of snow was a relief despite yielding him no clues; at least they hadn’t been watching his struggle, peering over the edge at him and retreating to the trees to wait for him to poke his head up above the cliffs where they could get a bullet or--worse--a dart into him.

A relief, but not an answer, and he knew he must act quickly to locate them, break any ambush they might have laid for him and intercept them on their path to the cabin, if indeed it was their destination. Which it appeared to be, tracks making themselves plain the next moment when he inched another foot forward through the timber, a simple chunk of snow out of place there at the edge of the sunny clearing providing his first clue and then, studying the spot through the glasses, a double line of snowshoe tracks in the shadows, mostly obscured by timber but unmistakable; he’d found them.

Swiftly, silently, ears straining for the slightest clue that the pair might have doubled back on their tracks and be waiting in ambush, Einar worked his way nearer the spring, twice losing the tracks in the timber as he watched from fa distance but finding them again where they crossed the small clearing that lay between the water and the dense stand of spruces opposite it, and there he saw something that made the breath catch in his throat and a slow grin soften and split the mass of hard lines and strained intensity that was his face.

Two sets of tracks over there and two white-clad, hooded and goggled figures crouching in the snow before a dense grouping of firs just below the spring and he froze--got you!--sinking slowly to the ground, glad their backs were turned to him and ready to act, taking one and then the other in quick succession but something wasn’t right, one of the men oddly hunched over and then--reaching for the binoculars but didn’t even need them--he realized that one of the figures wasn’t real, couldn’t be real, proportions all wrong and the lifeless list with which he sagged to one side suggesting either a carefully arranged and propped dead man--seemed unlikely--or perhaps simply a stuffed coat left there as decoy, and the knowledge came almost too late, but not quite, Einar sensing some presence behind him--tricked me, the filthy buzzards, and I fell for it--hitting the ground, rolling hard to the left and loosing a dart from his atlatl, missing--heard it hit wood--tossing the weapon and coming up with his knife as the other man dropped from the low branch on which he’d been concealed and hit him a hard blow from above, knocking the wind from him and attempting to pin him to the ground.

Einar, possessed of the insane strength of a man accustomed to existing very near the brink and fighting at the moment for something far dearer to him even than his life, managed to roll free of his assailant with the help of the soft snow but he’d lost his knife, had no backup aside from the spear, which was beyond arm’s reach and the man was coming at him again so he used his body, slamming him from the side and pinning him by the neck against a rock with one arm, grabbing, searching with the other for a pistol, knife, anything, but not finding it and then his attacker, much heavier if not necessarily stronger under the circumstances, threw him, a hard kick to the side of his head trying to send him careening into blackness but he hung on, blinking hard and straining against the roaring emptiness as it sought to claim him, lunging, making contact once more and knocking his foe to the ground, mashing him into the deep powder with the force of his strike and this time he had the advantage, had a good firm hold on the man’s throat with both hands and was well on the way to squeezing the life out of him when he was brought up short by a familiar voice which he thought at first must be Liz’s.

They had her. Must have her, a hostage, were attempting to use her as leverage against him but he didn’t see how it could be; they’d not had time to make it to the cabin and back and why would she had ventured all the way up there of her own accord and what about the baby? but he couldn’t let go, mustn’t let go before the job was done for then he’d still be left with two opponents to face and would have little chance of freeing Liz, for his strength was nearly gone and the man would have him. Hands on his shoulders, Liz’s voice again and though it wasn’t Liz’s face there before him, inches from his own, it was a face he knew, and then he knew the one down there in the snow, too, turning all blue and bug-eyed in his grip and he eased up, let the man breathe again, sitting back on his heels and watching as Susan brushed the snow from Kilgore’s face, helped him sit up, gasping for air as he began regaining his color. A few coughs and chokes later and beginning to breathe fairly normally again, Bud fished around in the churned up snow beneath him, coming up with Einar’s knife and returning it to its owner, Einar quickly tucking it away, hand remaining ready to grab the weapon as he leaned against a tree for balance, eyes wide and wild, panting for breath and by all measures worse off than the tracker, despite the man’s rather near miss with death.

Seeing that Einar appeared unlikely to take anymore sudden action Kilgore staggered to his feet and, followed closely by Susan, retreated by a few steps, huffing and puffing and swiping the sweat from his face as he sat on a rock from which he kept a wary eye on the fugitive lest he decide to make another move. Doubted it, but can be hard to tell, sometimes.

“Well now that’s a…real fine way to congratulate a man on his honeymoon, Asmundson! And I even set things up so we could talk first this time from a safe distance before anybody went and made any rash moves, only you end up sniffing me out and planting yourself directly under my hide, pretty nearly driving a dart through my neck before I could get a word out. Now, what about that? Thing only missed by an inch, if that. Your aim’s pretty good, man, especially for having not even set eyes on me before loosing the thing.”

“Told you I was gonna kill you if you ever dragged your mangy hide up here into my basin again, and as for the dart, I could hear you breathing up there. Just didn’t hear quite soon enough, or you’d be history just about now.”

“We’ll all be history soon enough, so let’s not artificially hasten the day, how about?”

“Yeah.”

“Now about this little visit to your mountain kingdom, Asmundson. I know you strictly forbade any such attempt but we’re on our honeymoon, man, so cut us some slack! And besides, we’ve just come up here to extend our greetings to the new little prince or princess of the mountain domain, if said child has happened to put in an appearance, so what do you say? Got your permission to proceed?”

No. They did not have permission. Not until he’d thought it over good and thoroughly, searched them body and soul and he meant to tell them so, but the fight had taken all his strength, exhausting the meager resources with which his body had somehow been propelling itself forward after the exertion of the cliff, and Einar could feel himself slipping again towards the strangeness that had been lurking all day at the edge of his consciousness just waiting to claim him, was terrified at the prospect of having one of his episodes in the presence of the two interlopers and thus exposing to them a vulnerability which he would have greatly preferred to keep hidden, but had no time to get away, nowhere to go, had to settle for throwing himself behind a spruce as it sank its talons into him…

Comments from 14 January

Nancy1340 said…
Thanks. Very good chapter.

Thanks for reading!

Sixfifty said…
Whew! It has taken me months (and on my birthday, too!!) to catch up; you are a writing machine, FOTH. It is good to see little Snorri out in the world, hopefully his presence will help bring Einar the rest of the way 'home' from his past. Lot of goodness, too; a cozy little cabin his beloved mountains, Bud and Susan's nuptials, and their upcoming visit (if they survive the greeting, lol).
I hope all is well in your world as well, FOTH.

Hi, glad to see you here, and glad you’re all caught up!

Yes, little Snorri’s existence is going to change things for Einar, for sure--and they really do have a good snug little place there, if they can just keep it.

If you haven’t been there yet, perhaps you’d like to come take a look at my forum--a place to discuss wilderness skills and other topics, as well as the story!


Thanks for reading!

14 January, 2012

14 January 2012

Weary. Cold. Legs, when he tried them, less than stable, threatening to betray him, spill him face-first in the snow but this did not disturb Einar too greatly, for he’d reached his destination, settled himself against the trees to watch, wait, and was confident that the enemy would soon be walking up right below him, directly in his line of fire, no chance of spotting him for the light screen of baby firs that shielded his position, and he would have them. Wouldn’t need his legs until after, when they’d been dealt with and he was hurrying back to Liz to get her out of the area before another team could be inserted, and by then, judging from past experience, they ought to have regained a useful amount of strength, world grown a bit less strange and baffling around him. His only real concern at the moment was that the episode might have affected his aim; he seemed to grow so dreadfully cold after the incidents, wholly drained of energy and less than steady on his feet for a time, and the thought that this might reduce the efficacy and accuracy of his dart throws was a disturbing one, but there wasn’t too much he could do about it, not now, would simply have to put all his concentration into the effort, hope nothing else happened, and throw…

Time passed, sun climbing and spilling its golden brilliance into the basin below as Einar sat freezing against his two trees, atlatl ready, raven keeping a silent vigil above him in a dead snag that jutted out oddly from one of the living evergreens to providing a ready perch, and they didn’t come. Somehow, he must have miscalculated. That bothered him. The possibility that he could no longer trust his own judgment, the deeply ingrained instincts and the tradecraft that had seen him alive and free if seldom entirely unscathed through so many near situations--without that, he’d be lost. They would all be lost. Had to get it back, somehow get his mind engaged as it ought to be and make sense of the situation. Where would they have gone, these strangers dropped into his basin at dawn, if not up through the natural and heavily timbered channel beside which he waited? What made sense? Was it possible that he’d somehow managed to misinterpret the entire situation, the nature and identity of the intruders, themselves, rendering his understanding of their likely future actions so inaccurate as to be useless? Such doubt would be the end of him if once he ever allowed it to take hold, and he pushed it aside, struggled to focus his eyes on the snowy timber that spread out below him, studying the white spaces between trees for any sign of motion, the areas of deeper shadow that might conceal a line of tracks, intruders already passed by and he urgently needing to be on their trail lest they reach the cabin ahead of him, but seeing nothing. Likely as anything, he told himself, the strange episode had simply distorted his perception of time, left him anticipating company far sooner than they reasonably could be expected to arrive. He would wait. And did. For too long.

Needed to move. Was beginning to feel that odd prickling sensation at the base of his scalp which many years and a good number of near misses had taught him he could ignore only at his own great peril, and then from above him somewhere in the timber he heard a rustle and a crunch, something moving in the snow, something far larger than the chickadees and Oregon juncos he’d been watching as they scratched and searched for seeds amongst the fir needles in the more protected and snow-free areas, and slowly--wide awake now, world back in sharp focus--he turned, scanning the densely-growing trees, saw it.

Just a flash of movement on the edge of vision, no color or definite form to tell him what he’d seen, everything white between the trees and the deep blue lines of their shadows, but it had not fit, the thing he’d seen, as if a portion of the snowy forest floor up there had heaved and rose and moved for a brief second, and he knew that wasn’t right. Someone up there. Above him. Enemy had worked their way in behind where he had expected them to pass and was stalking him, likely had already seen him and suddenly he found himself fully immersed in his worst nightmare, living it--one of them, anyway--as it seemed to be playing out around him, enemy about to take him, incapacitate him in some way and leave him bound and helpless for the next team to deal with as they followed his backtrail to the cabin, where no one would be there to prevent them having their way with Liz and little Will. And he, drugged, beaten and secured in the back of a Blackhawk--they’d take no chances this time, none at all--would be whisked away to who knew where, wouldn’t even be around to sift through the ashes this time, let alone make his final stand up there, holding the enemy off for a day or two while they made their escape as he fully intended to do.

Not going to end that way. He wouldn’t have it. Was on his feet, moving swiftly and with only a slight stumble here and there off into the timber, dart held at the ready and every sense alert for the location of his foe, determined to find the pair and stop them. They would be armed, well fed--and fully in control of their faculties, which, admit it, you’re really not right now, Einar. You’re a mess. Unreliable. Near useless--and thoroughly briefed on the area and what they could expect, but still he had the advantage. Knew the place nearly as well as it could be known, and was fighting not only for his own life but for something far more precious. And--searching for some positive aspect to a situation in which he was deliberately seeking to pit atlatl and darts against rifles, pistols, heck, they’ve probably got grenades, satchel charges, who knows what else?-- when he’d taken them, which he had no choice but to do, he would have access to whatever firearms they were carrying--almost certainly even radios, and this time, before the end, he might well find cause to use them--which would put him in a stronger position for the siege he’d got planned for up at the cabin The delay and distraction which would allow his family to escape, and to live.

Higher into the timber, hands and knees at times to prevent himself slipping backwards on the steep snow, belly low to the ground, glad his parka blended reasonably well with the surroundings, if not quite as well as the snow camouflage he was certain concealed his opponent. Had to gain the advantage, the high ground, and it was difficult to do when he had no solid idea of where the men might have gone, but he would find them.

Tracks. He hadn’t expected to find tracks up this high, had been sure he must by then be above them but clearly they’d gone on before him--two men, one heavier and taller than the other but both carrying packs, traveling on snowshoes to prevent their sinking too deeply into the snow calling for more speed on his part if he was to place himself between the enemy and the cabin, which he absolutely must do. Must not follow their trail too closely, though, as he knew it was likely an ambush, a trap, tracks left where they knew he’d find them in the hopes of drawing him in and allowing him to be taken with little risk to the invaders, just as he had intended on doing with them. How had it happened? How had he lost not only the high ground to these two strangers, but most of his advantage, as well, almost as if they’d been there before?

No time for why. Not now. Time only to move, seek, and destroy. They were, no doubt, attempting to double back on him by now if they knew he was there, and he couldn’t allow it. Took off at nearly a right angle from the line of tracks, working his way through some of the heaviest timber he could find and not getting another look at those tracks until he was up nearly at the level of the overlook, which, much to his dismay, appeared to be their destination. Not good. He could still work his way in above them and get the shot he so badly needed, but at this point it meant keeping himself below the rim of the overlook--a fragmented landscape of nearly sheer cliffs, icy, uncertain--until he reached the timber on its far side and allowing them to be up there above him the entire time, waiting, listening, perhaps, to his struggle and popping over the edge, if they chose, to take him, shoot him, drop him seventy five feet to the waiting rocks below. If his own weakness and lack of coordination didn’t do it to him, before they ever had the opportunity.

Enough. Got no other choice. No better choice, and you better make it quick, too, because if they aren’t busy setting up an ambush as you expect, they may well be halfway to the cabin by now, and you pretty nearly too late. And he was doing it, leaving the timber to venture out onto a narrow ledge of rock which stretched nearly horizontal but very icy out across the cliff face, edging his way forward with hands gripping roots and rock spurs and jammed into icy crevices for purchase, body arching out over the abyss.